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this looks great. the only thing that looks a little off is panel 4 where you have the guy being hit but he appears to be moving in the opposite direction of the monsters arm. I think you meant for him to be spinning from the hit. I would just twist the lower body back towards the monster a little to sell it better.. Then again.. maybe once it's colored that blood will show up a little better, which pretty much does the same thing. Not that I am an expert or claiming to be great at this or anything. I'm a lot better at seeing this stuff than I am at putting it on paper. This is just my thoughts. either way it does look great like I said.